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Jimmy1510 said:

Hi everyone, I'm an 18 year old Dale fan and I write reports on all the Dale games as I hope to become a sports journalist in the future. For anyone interested in the report from tonight's game, here's the link: http://questforthe92.weebly.com

Cheers and good luck for the rest of the season, I think you're a shoe in for the playoffs at least.

Jimmy

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shmmeee said:

Overuse of "both" in the first paragraph and "it was" in the second. Try to vary your language more.

It's Jacob Murphy not Josh.

Other than that, really good stuff.

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