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Jimmy1510

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Hi everyone, I'm an 18 year old Dale fan and I write reports on all the Dale games as I hope to become a sports journalist in the future. For anyone interested in the report from tonight's game, here's the link: http://questforthe92.weebly.com

Cheers and good luck for the rest of the season, I think you're a shoe in for the playoffs at least.

Jimmy
 

sw88

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Didn't realise you had Camps playing. Perhaps if the PA system was better I would have known (I thought ours at the Ricoh was bad!!). In my football manager game recently I signed him for 3 consecutive seasons and he was great!

Lillis is a very decent keeper. Your lucky to have him!

Good piece by the way! Keep it up, and good luck for your season too. Just not on the return fixture of course :D
 

Gazolba

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Extremely annoying to try and read text with a photograph behind it. Gave up after the first couple of paragraphs.
 

lifeskyblue

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Thanks buddy. Enjoyed your report. I think you have a good chance of making the playoffs


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standupforcity

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Hi everyone, I'm an 18 year old Dale fan and I write reports on all the Dale games as I hope to become a sports journalist in the future. For anyone interested in the report from tonight's game, here's the link: http://questforthe92.weebly.com

Cheers and good luck for the rest of the season, I think you're a shoe in for the playoffs at least.

Jimmy

Well done Jimmy, a very easy to read and understand review. Gave me a good sense of the atmosphere...
 

shmmeee

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Overuse of "both" in the first paragraph and "it was" in the second. Try to vary your language more.

It's Jacob Murphy not Josh.

Other than that, really good stuff.
 

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