CET: totally correct grammatical sentence shocker! Stokes trial. (1 Viewer)

[mrtrench]

http://www.coventrytelegraph.net/news/coventry-news/coventry-city-triallist-chris-stokes-8643171

'Asked if a free transfer is an option, Hockaday said: “That’s up to the powers that be but we’re getting him in, having a look and the lad is doing everything that’s been asked of him.” '

Conjunction not preceded by a comma; correct use of the apostrophe - thrice; every word spelt correctly!

Alan Hack not credited with report.

 

[ccfcway]

"Forest Green don’t want to stand in his way"

translated as "Forest Green don't want him and want to free up his wages, but know they cant place a value on him as no-one will take him"

 

[rob9872]

As your use of the colon doesn't precede a list, I would have thought it correct that "totally" should have a capital letter.

Why this place is frequented by smart arses, when the reason for discussion is CCFC, I find baffling. Do you think we will all bow down to your superior knowledge at picking holes in a local rag (which is after all Mirror Group - what did you expect?) or are you simply a c**t?

 

[Astute]

http://www.coventrytelegraph.net/news/coventry-news/coventry-city-triallist-chris-stokes-8643171

'Asked if a free transfer is an option, Hockaday said: “That’s up to the powers that be but we’re getting him in, having a look and the lad is doing everything that’s been asked of him.” '

Conjunction not preceded by a comma; correct use of the apostrophe - thrice; every word spelt correctly!

Alan Hack not credited with report.

 

[Alan Dugdales Moustache]

No need for colon before speech, so I'm afraid it's wrong.