Typo Check :) (1 Viewer)

Nick

Administrator
Cheeky request, about to get some flyers printed. Just wondered if anybody could spot a Typo? Don't want 5,000 with a spelling error. I have read it a few times, but sometimes when you read something too much it all becomes a blur!

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Colonel Mustard

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It'd be fine as it is, though it could do with a polish here and there, e.g. enter instead of put in; perhaps rewrite the Earn section so it goes '...Find It For Less. You don't even need to buy anything to earn cashback. Simply share offers...'

Not a typo tip, but it does strike me that the 'Post' element is redundant. The 'Share' element appears to do the same thing, and it'd be snappier to have three markers instead of four (Share. Earn. Buy vs. Post. Earn. Share. Buy)
 

Nick

Administrator
Ah, they are different (Post and Share) so I will re-word it I think.

Thankyou :)

Edit: does this make more sense?

Post = Post on the site
Share = Share things from the site on Facebook etc

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Houchens Head

Fairly well known member from Malvern
Call me Mr Picky, but wouldn't "£££'s" look better than just "£" (as in 'save £'). It just reads to me that all you're saving is £1 :thinking about:
 

Houchens Head

Fairly well known member from Malvern
Yayy!!! Much betterer! (or gooder, depending what part of Cov you live in! :) )
 

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