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Typo Check :) (2 Viewers)

  • Thread starter Nick
  • Start date Oct 28, 2014
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Nick

Administrator
  • Oct 28, 2014
  • #1
Cheeky request, about to get some flyers printed. Just wondered if anybody could spot a Typo? Don't want 5,000 with a spelling error. I have read it a few times, but sometimes when you read something too much it all becomes a blur!

 

Colonel Mustard

New Member
  • Oct 28, 2014
  • #2
It'd be fine as it is, though it could do with a polish here and there, e.g. enter instead of put in; perhaps rewrite the Earn section so it goes '...Find It For Less. You don't even need to buy anything to earn cashback. Simply share offers...'

Not a typo tip, but it does strike me that the 'Post' element is redundant. The 'Share' element appears to do the same thing, and it'd be snappier to have three markers instead of four (Share. Earn. Buy vs. Post. Earn. Share. Buy)
 

Nick

Administrator
  • Oct 28, 2014
  • #3
Ah, they are different (Post and Share) so I will re-word it I think.

Thankyou

Edit: does this make more sense?

Post = Post on the site
Share = Share things from the site on Facebook etc

 

blueflint

Well-Known Member
  • Oct 28, 2014
  • #4
looks ok to me nick the second ones better
 

Houchens Head

Fairly well known member from Malvern
  • Oct 28, 2014
  • #5
Call me Mr Picky, but wouldn't "£££'s" look better than just "£" (as in 'save £'). It just reads to me that all you're saving is £1 :thinking about:
 

Nick

Administrator
  • Oct 29, 2014
  • #6
Thanks for the input, updated it now.

 

Houchens Head

Fairly well known member from Malvern
  • Oct 29, 2014
  • #7
Yayy!!! Much betterer! (or gooder, depending what part of Cov you live in! )
 

Sick Boy

Super Moderator
  • Oct 30, 2014
  • #8
Good luck with the site, mate! Hope it takes off!
 

Nick

Administrator
  • Oct 30, 2014
  • #9
Thanks fellas
 
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