Ramage Limitation (3 Viewers)

87mint · Jan 31, 2016

http://thelonelyseason.club/match-reports/ramage-limitation

So many levels to that pun.

This is getting a bit repetitive

TLS x

wingy · Jan 31, 2016

Was that your Genesis parked up at Arena Station?

Warwickhunt · Jan 31, 2016

I saw the Pollar Bear Man he kept farting all the way up the steps to his seat

Huckerby · Jan 31, 2016

Again a really good bit of writing. Unfortunately can't say I enjoyed reading it

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Brylowes · Jan 31, 2016

Huckerby said:
Again a really good bit of writing. Unfortunately can't say I enjoyed reading it

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A good read:but I preferred it with the pictures behind the text.

usskyblue · Jan 31, 2016

We could try Gray at CB ...

Gazolba · Jan 31, 2016

Good account, which I could actually read this time. Congratulations.
Although blue or black on white or cream would have been easier on the eyes than white on black.
When did you last read a book with black pages and white text?
I skipped the entire long first paragraph as it appeared completely irrelevant.
The best part was the report on the replacement linesman's antics.

Silsden · Jan 31, 2016

Excellent read as always, try and find a font that will annoy Gazolba more, as I found his critique completely irrelevant

Otis · Jan 31, 2016

I want big black letters, all in capitals!

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87mint · Feb 1, 2016

If you're looking for a completely 'relevant' match report then this one definitely isn't for you.

usskyblue · Feb 1, 2016

87mint said:
If you're looking for a completely 'relevant' match report then read matty roper's and give me a bell when you flat line

To be honest, for me, it was like reading riddles, like you're trying too hard to wax lyrical. Perhaps you should consider being a little more 'relevant', rather than knocking it.

87mint · Feb 1, 2016

Since waxing lyrical means praising, I get the feeling you didn't read it at all....,

usskyblue · Feb 1, 2016

87mint said:
Since waxing lyrical means praising, I get the feeling you didn't read it at all....,

You're either offended or selective...you missed 'trying too hard'.

Don't get me wrong, it isn't bad. When you're 'playing with words', don't lose focus on the subject matter.

Just an opinion.

usskyblue · Feb 1, 2016

87mint said:
If you're looking for a completely 'relevant' match report then this one definitely isn't for you.

Wise edit.......it's late in the UK anyway, not many, if any, will have seen your original comment.

Unfortunately, since I already quoted it....it will stick.

So, as you'd word play; Mum isn't the word.

Bummer

Your only hope is that they can't be arsed to look back

Joy Division · Feb 1, 2016

Love it, excellent read yet again.

mechaishida · Feb 1, 2016

Always look forward to your submissions, mate, another excellent read.

Rodders1 · Feb 1, 2016

Jesus there's some lovely comments on here. Great read as usual. And for those that didn't appreciate it ...... I look forward to reading your masterpiece's.

usskyblue · Feb 1, 2016

He was (unfairly) less than complimentary about someone else's blog. Which is always ill advised when your own isn't perfect.

He edited it, so fair play to him.

Joy Division · Feb 1, 2016

Can't see where he's been less than complimentary about another blog TBF TBH

usskyblue · Feb 1, 2016

Joy Division said:
Can't see where he's been less than complimentary about another blog TBF TBH

Fair play, he did the right thing and edited it. I'm not going to drag it up again.

87mint · Feb 1, 2016

Yeah it was a stupid comment from me. Childish.

usskyblue · Feb 1, 2016

Kudos for putting it right.

Your writing is good, it's entertaining, so-much-so that it's even a good read after a shitty loss.

I know it's a blog, but if you want to take it further, a good article has a mix of facts and scene setting/story telling. I have a contact at the Guardian, one of their sports journalists. If I see one of your blogs that I think he might like, I'll send it to him, with your blessing of course.

Otis · Feb 1, 2016

usskyblue said:
Fair play, he did the right thing and edited it. I'm not going to drag it up again.

Oh go on!!! Do, do!!!!

usskyblue · Feb 1, 2016

Otis said:
Oh go on!!! Do, do!!!!

It wasn't that bad m8....

Otherwise I would

Otis · Feb 1, 2016

Did he slag my blog off? Did he? Did he?

If he did I will be most put out.

lifeskyblue · Feb 1, 2016

Another excellent piece. I'm just waiting to read your contribution when we next win. Please please be soon

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