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Feedback on Advert (1 Viewer)

  • Thread starter Nick
  • Start date Oct 11, 2014
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Nick

Administrator
  • Oct 11, 2014
  • #1
Following on from the flyer, have had an advert made.

[video=youtube;Ta6Sr17jEPQ]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ta6Sr17jEPQ[/video]

Any feedback?
 
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wingy

Well-Known Member
  • Oct 11, 2014
  • #2
ISc Debbie a Ging .

all good nick ,apart from seeming a tad long??
 

Nick

Administrator
  • Oct 11, 2014
  • #3
It is a bit longer than normal to cram all of the benefits in
 

harvey098

Well-Known Member
  • Oct 11, 2014
  • #4
Very good nick!
 

Nick

Administrator
  • Oct 14, 2014
  • #5
Any other feedback?
 

mds

Well-Known Member
  • Oct 14, 2014
  • #6
Probably a minute longer than it needs to be, way too much unnecesary filler, she dosnt need any secrets, dont need to know she`s missing out, nor about her friend, nor the list of named stores top brands would do, a lot i would change (take out) but thats me, right idea just too long.
 

mds

Well-Known Member
  • Oct 14, 2014
  • #7
I just had a look at the site, didnt enter a search term just hit enter, got a pop up to enter 2 char. or more but it wouldnt go away it covered the search box so i couldnt see what i had typed then even with what looked like 5 or 6 random letters wouldnt respond had to reload the page.



Latest firefox with addblock plus!
 

Nick

Administrator
  • Oct 14, 2014
  • #8
mds said:
I just had a look at the site, didnt enter a search term just hit enter, got a pop up to enter 2 char. or more but it wouldnt go away it covered the search box so i couldnt see what i had typed then even with what looked like 5 or 6 random letters wouldnt respond had to reload the page.

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Latest firefox with addblock plus!
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Cheers, that's the old site so it's getting ready to launch a new version
 

blueflint

Well-Known Member
  • Oct 14, 2014
  • #9
spot on nick very good
 

Rusty Trombone

Well-Known Member
  • Oct 14, 2014
  • #10
Looks good, very professional. Where are you planning the ad will be seen, will there be a shorter version as well?
 
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jon92

New Member
  • Oct 15, 2014
  • #11
Looks good mate. Abit to much information though needs to be broken down into separate parts and a minute long max
 
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